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the wings are so out of place and the colors are arse-ugly. but i felt like submitting it anyways. i'll scrap it eventually. you can critique everything else. i'm still getting the hang of painting.

it's from a story i'm doing called The City of Lost Children.

from left to right, their names are:
long chen
lillian lin
isamu narita
jennifer dunbar
alex (haven't decided on a last name)

yeah, alex looks like guy cecil. i'll change his style eventually. kosuke fujishima gets the credit for this one.

eventually, i'll write down The City of Lost Children in a novel, but i'm gonna do more (and better) paintings of this series.

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rescanned and cleaned up the image. it looks better now in my opinion.
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Kosuke Fujishima's a good guy, with an easy style to follow (he's where I started XD); and yeah, Alex does look like Guy. Not that there's anything wrong with that :lol:

The colors look fine to me, just that they were imported with some strange bit of magenta added in. A little bit of photoshop will clear that right up!

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"...Let's face it, this is not the worst thing you've caught me doing."
totally agree with you. i took a couple of designs from the tales series because i love them so much. the red head guy's dad (in the middle), looks a bit like kratos.

guy cecil rocks by the way.

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aha aha
Now that I look at it, he does look like Kratos ._.
Guy IS kinda cool; reminded me a bit of Lloyd.

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"...Let's face it, this is not the worst thing you've caught me doing."
You're (writing/going to write) a novel too? I am totally doing that right now!! :D

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*Link voice* I won!
You have some good character designs here although I think (and I don't know if this was intentional) but Long, Isamu, and Jennifer all look pretty similar in both facial design and hair style. Unless its supposed to be that way for the story I would try to vary some of designs so they look more distinct so you know who is who even if they all wore the same outfit.

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“I am Caine ..... I will help you.”- Kwai Chang Caine
er, okay. i do have some problems designing short haired people.

there all supposed to have different eye shapes, but maybe it's not clear enough.


Thanks for pointing that out :)!

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aha aha
Yeah like I said before don't be afraid to mess around with other styles. You may end up liking how one of your characters look better with a few differently draw features. I'm still messing around with different styles myself but that's one of an animator's ultimate goals, developing a style distinct enough where people just know "it's you" !!!

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“I am Caine ..... I will help you.”- Kwai Chang Caine

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